Very good remix! Very good! Great work that sounds very atmospheric!
I can only highlight a couple of problems:
If I were you, I would add a little more reverb time on the intro synths to set the right atmosphere.
It would also be worth making sure that the mix is not a bit overdriven, using the volume and frequency analyzers.
There's not much I can say about the pre-drop and the drop itself, except that it sounds really cool!
The part at 2.35 could have sounded even punchier if there had been a bit more attack on the sidechain.
Also the part at 2.59 sounds very atmospheric and cool, but it would have been worth adding a sidechain as well to make the drums sound powerful. I also recommend not to put low frequency impaccts where the drums are, especially if the bass is there, so that there is no frequency conflict.
By the way, the Riddim part at the end sounds epic!
I also liked the end of this remix, it also sounds atmospheric.
Bottom line: I recommend watching out for mixing and frequency conflicts to make your songs sound even better. I'll put my 10\10 because I really like this remix!