Dude, what are you doing! Very good and high-quality work! It sounds very modern and cool!
Dude, what are you doing! Very good and high-quality work! It sounds very modern and cool!
Thank you :]
As far as I'm concerned, there's some kind of idea here, but it was worth more work on the implementation. We could work on filling out the mix, and on other details too. Also, the drums sound too bright in some parts, it was worth taking a softer kick, which would not look like something trap-ish.
I'm waiting for even more of your songs, I hope you'll take everything into account in them.
Thank you so much! I will say, I definitely could have mixed it better. The song is pretty quiet. I tend to rush things when I get a good idea. I'm learning more about mixing, and using the new stuff with some of the projects I'm working on. Maybe I'll come back to this song and adjust it at some point. I'm also learning to have patience with these songs.
I'll drop more stuff soon!!!
Overall, it's not a bad idea for the song itself, but the implementation could have been even better. I recommend working on the dynamics of the songs in subsequent songs, as well as making brighter mastering if possible, this can be achieved using a regular Multiband Compressor, it's just one plug-in, but it will be able to set the energy in each of your songs.I also recommend downloading DirectWave libraries with all kinds of pianos and pads, they definitely sound much better than stock sounds.
I can also recommend you other tool packs for DW Sampler, I downloaded it all for fun not so long ago, but it turned out that they can even match the sound in the desktop version of FL.
Thanks for the tips! … multiband compressor you say… I’ll have to learn that one!
Oh my God, this is one of my favorite songs now! I really like this kind of atmospheric Trance with the piano!
Thanks G2! Atmospheric trance is one of my favorite genres atm.
It sounds really cool! Really! The only thing I would recommend is that you keep an eye on the mix of the songs, as I can hear the sound clipping at some points, but it doesn't matter, it still sounds very cool and fun!
Thank you very much, these are things I'll improve over time. I'm going to take a break from music and probably get back to it next year.
Thank you so much for your comment, it helps me a lot!
Congratulations on Frontpaged! To be honest, I'm very annoyed by the monotonous Jungle and Breakcore with Amen Break, but this one turned out to be quite successful!
Wow, it turns out you're also doing Artcore! I think the synths could have sounded clearer, especially on the break part, and the piano could have been more lively, but overall it turned out very cool!
I really like it! This retro instrumental is even very suitable for rap vocals. I think vocal vocoding could be good here, like in old retro electronic songs from the 80s.
Для первого трека вполне неплохо, у меня было намного хуже, ахахахаахха. Если ты ещё и подашься в музыку, то тогда я буду следить за твоими прогрессами. Кто знает, может ты когда-нибудь построишь крутой уровень под свой же крутой трек)
Проблемы этого трека в очень странных и атональных мелодиях и эффектах, хотя я могу предположить, что всё жё это рофл трек, но всё же.
Если ты реально будешь пытаться писать музыку, то удачи! Будет круто, если ты кроме крутых уровней сможешь писать годное музло! Могу давать фидбек, если вдруг захочешь, за всё времяпровождение на этом сайте я понял, что без него нихуя не получится нормально подняться.
спасибо огромное!!
Wow, what a cool job! I really like this epic atmosphere! Congratulations on Frontpaged too, you deserve it!
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