The first thing that caught my ear is that the mix is too over-clipped, it seems like it should have been worked on the balance of the mix. It lacks a lot of variety, some transitions, something more in the background to these melodies, drums and bass. Very strange sounding melody at 1:56, it feels like it sounds out of tune with these melodies, and the melody itself is strange, you should change the preset of this sound. I liked the ending!
What's the conclusion? It seems to me that there's just not enough variety here, balance of the mix itself and some other corrections. But the idea of the song itself is good, but the realization could be better! Good luck with your new songs, I hope my comment will help you!
Oh yeah, you can get a scout from any user who already has that scout on their account. For example, from me, if I think someone's work really deserves it.