The melodies and the chord progression are very good, I like it! but it seems to me that this can be improved, for example: add some cymbal transitions or something like that, as well as somehow diversify the structure of the track. by the way, I recommend experimenting with changing the key, for example, in the last part of the track, it may sound good.
In any case, it's actually a very good job, but you can refine it a little.
by the way, your music is really getting better, keep up the good work, you draw cool arts, so I believe that you will succeed in music! :D